Poet's Tool Box Part 2: Meter

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By Tom Rubenoff

I am not going to discuss the mechanics of classical meter.  You can read more about this in any good poetry text book. Here I am going to talk about what meter means today.

Meter uses rhythm to command the attention of the reader/listener. Today we have poetry that is exclusively spoken in front of an audience and at the other end of the spectrum we have poetry that is only read silently by individuals. While the spoken-word artist’s use of meter may be more obvious, meter is just as important to the poet whose work will not ever be read aloud.

Let me interject here that I think all poetry should be read aloud. I have heard it said that when you read a poem aloud you give it a whole new life. I think that is true.

Yet some poetry is not intended to be read aloud, but read silently by individuals sitting apart on their own, in private, absorbing the words of the poet by themselves. This is a very intimate and special interaction as well, and I do not disapprove of it.

What I urge in regard to meter is to learn the iamb, trochee, dactyl, etc., and then go to poetry slams until you see where they all fit in. Practice with a strictly metered form – maybe a villanelle or a pantoum - either selected from a text book, from the work of an established poet or one you invent. In doing so you will learn to think in rhythmic patterns that will help you improve your poetry.

Think why nursery rhymes are so memorable – not just because they rhyme, but because of their rigid meter. Think about Shakespeare’s sonnets, ten syllables a line, stresses on every even syllable, every word immortal.

The point is that, like rhyme, meter is a very powerful tool. Once again, read your poetry aloud or hear it in your head and sense its rhythm, its music. Ah, now you’re writing poetry.

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Randy Behavior profile image

Randy Behavior Level 2 Commenter 15 months ago

Oh jeez I guess I need to buy a book!

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Micky Dee Level 3 Commenter 15 months ago

Yes sir Tom! You have great advice. You have a way with words too! Some us of no way have! Oops. See what I mean? God bless Tom!

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kathryn1000 Level 4 Commenter 15 months ago

Very useful.Thank you

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Tom Rubenoff Hub Author 15 months ago

There is the library, too, Randy :) But I believe you have books you could use for this purpose.

Micky Dee, is this what we be speaking of? :)

Thanks, Kathryn!

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kathryn1000 Level 4 Commenter 15 months ago

Yes,it's a good concise article

Randy Behavior profile image

Randy Behavior Level 2 Commenter 15 months ago

I meant specifically the "Well Versed" one. Tried to buy it on Kindle via your link but it is not offered that way yet.

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DavePrice Level 3 Commenter 15 months ago

You're right, there are enough good books out there to teach the mechanics. But you have done a wonderful job here of concisely illustrating the absolute essence of them all.

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Genna East Level 6 Commenter 15 months ago

"Let me interject here that I think all poetry should be read aloud. I have heard it said that when you read a poem aloud you give it a whole new life. I think that is true."

Absolutely, Tom, you are spot-on. Thanks for this hub, which I found informative and helpful.

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Storytellersrus Level 7 Commenter 15 months ago

Tom, succinct and thought-provoking, like a poet. Thank you for carrying your poetry slam wisdom back to hubpages. I think this wisdom applies to all writing, don't you? I was always told to read my stories aloud... I appreciate the reminder. Thumbs up!

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Tom Rubenoff Hub Author 15 months ago

"How To Be Well Versed in Poetry" is informative and funny. Good choice, Randy!

Thanks, Dave!

Thank you, Genna! For this and for your informative hubs on poetry.

Thank you Storyteller!

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K. Burns Darling Level 5 Commenter 15 months ago

Thank you for the much needed "Sunday morning kick-start" for my brain, and some insight into a slight case of writer's block that I am currently suffering through. A refresher course in basic mechanics and technique certainly couldn't hurt, and it might just help... I am definitely a part of the read-it-aloud crowd, and not just in regard to poetry either. When my children were young, I used meter and rhyme to help them memorize their spelling words, and to develop their pre-writing story building skills. As they got to be a little older, I taught them to review their book reports, essays and compositions out loud to help them find punctuation and grammatical errors, as well as to check their body of work for rhythm and flow.

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juneaukid Level 2 Commenter 15 months ago

I enjoyed part two as well. I believe poetry that is truly lyrical should have meter but not as a mechanical dominant.

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Tom Rubenoff Hub Author 15 months ago

Thanks, KB. You touch on the original purpose of poetry and verse - to pass on the legends of the older generation to the younger.

Juneaukid you show discriminating taste.

Doug Turner Jr. 15 months ago

Though I read my poems out loud before posting them to search for errors, I have a rabid phobia of reading in front of an audience of any size. It's something I need to get over, because you're right: it adds whole new meaning to the words.

This is constructive and to the point. Very useful and helpful. Thank you.

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Tom Rubenoff Hub Author 15 months ago

From your work I can tell that you have a lot to say. But there is a performance factor to reading that is wholly alien to the composition aspect. To get over your phobia, I suggest you start reading your work aloud to one person. See how that feels. Maybe try another person. Then maybe two, and so forth. Maybe over coffee or lunch. A lot of it is just getting used to the sound of your own voice.

Doug Turner Jr. 15 months ago

I like that advice, Tom. My fiance better get ready for her own private poetry readings!

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Tom Rubenoff Hub Author 15 months ago

That sounds perfect!

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Christopher Price Level 2 Commenter 15 months ago

The rhythm of a line of poetry is as important as the words to establish the tone and timbre, to set the mood.

It is extremely off-putting to read a poem that begins to establish a discernible pattern, then fails to maintain it...step, STEP, step then SKIP, stutter-step and stumble. Invariably the flow is interrupted, I reread the line thinking I missed something, the train of thought is derailed and the pleasure quotient suffers.

Although there are plenty of books available for aspiring poets, this series of hubs should be required reading for every hubber wishing to wax poetic.

CP

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Tom Rubenoff Hub Author 15 months ago

Very true. I confess I have rejected many poems for that very reason. It's like being awakened from a pleasant dream to be told that the water heater is flooding the neighbor's apartment.

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